Prompt:
For each of the following passages, please provide:

a brief summary of the topic of the text;

a few brief positive and optimistic comments on the good points of the writer’s use of language;

offer constructive criticism, and make at least three specific suggestions with examples for improvement.

Keep any grammar & vocabulary changes at a level suitable for Intermediate adult ESL students.

Use headings per section, with bullet points, and keep each writer's feedback together.